this is why it is like trudging through pudding

this book edit is taking forever. Here’s why:

 

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The black is zero draft, the purple is new draft. LABORIOUS.

seriously. That’s about how much I have changed, all over the first half of the draft. Nevermind the actual plot stuff I’ve been adding. ┬áThat section about her jacket I spent approx. 5 hours on and it’s still kind of bad. I swear. BLAH.